Entry Number: 1712 Title: Clic Clac Muu

Category: original art Grade Level: K-1

Description: My teacher asked me to do my own cover page for the book "Clic Clac Muu, Vacas Escritoras" (Click Clack Moo, cows that type)by Doreen Cronin, illustrated by Betsy Lewin. Since I knew how to use paint I made my drawing on that program. I drew the sky first, then I drew the floor. I put clouds and a sun. Then I drew the barn, a cow and a duck. The cows used a typewriter in the story so I drew one of those too.

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Susan Vaughan	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	4	3
I like how in your drawing you show all of the main elements of this story. Next time you might think about the size of each part of your drawing. You made the typewriter so small it was hard to tell what it was. But I like your picture very much.
JA	5	5	5	5	5	5	5	5	5	5	4	4	3	5	5	5
You did a great job of using lots of graphics on your design, and I love the bold and bright colors. In the future, try to make sure the sizes of your animals are more realistic. (Example: the duck should be smaller than the cow.) Keep up the good work.
AK	5	5	5	4	5	5	5	5	5	5	4	5	5	5	5	5
Great job! Your explanation is very precise and appropriate. I like the choice of colors. However, to make the picture more realistic, the animals should have been the right shape and size. It would have added to the appeal of the art work.